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phinnia ([personal profile] phinnia) wrote2008-05-19 02:30 pm
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culture shock

For [livejournal.com profile] ecwoodburn, a drabble that fell out of my head like she asked for

Audra's new job is this: forensics, coroner and general medical slash biogeek for the time police in Seattle. She got it through eighty-five percent pure knowledge and fifteen percent nepotism: her mother is still part of the same organization, although on a more international level, and she made a phone call or two. Audra's not ashamed of that in the least. Connections are worthless if left unused, like a muscle that atrophies in zero-gravity. At first she thinks this use of connections and backtalk to do business is more the case in Hong Kong and that's why Americans have so many issues with the practice: in time she realizes that it's the same in both countries, but for some reason Americans hide it in shame instead of allowing it enough sunlight and air to grow naturally.

Audra thinks, not for the last time, that she will probably never understand Americans.

She remembers her coworkers, but with younger faces: Anthony with tousled hair and overalls, serious, studious even in the simple act of stacking blocks, Fabian staggering around in his mother's high heels and an outrageous pink spangled camisole that hung limply on his wire-thin frame.

Anthony is now khakis and coffee and looks eerily like her memories of Jack; she has to retag that face in her brain, now. She's nearly slipped and called him fu chan Jack, has to stop herself from bowing. Fabian grins and calls her jeih je like old times - big sister - but he's checking out her ass and the heels are on boots made of butter-soft leather that fit like they'd grown onto his calves.




*Author's note - fu chan Jack means something like "maternal uncle Jack" in Cantonese according to the niternet but if I've totally messed that up, TELL ME. I want to change it.

[identity profile] starlingthefool.livejournal.com 2008-05-19 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
MORE. I like this. You always have the coolest premises.

(Also, if she's from Hong Kong, chances are that she'd be speaking Cantonese instead of Mandarin.)

[identity profile] phinnia.livejournal.com 2008-05-20 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
(okay: do you know what phrases she'd use? I'm nitpicky and want to get that right. will fix soon, after House. if you don't that's fine, I can look them up)
Thank you! It's part of a bigger thing I'm working on. <3
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2008-05-20 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
time police? nifty!

(that's ok, audra - sometimes americans don't understand themselves either.)

[identity profile] phinnia.livejournal.com 2008-05-20 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
she's of british ancestry raised in Hong Kong, so she really doesn't get Americans. <3 <3 Thanks!
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[personal profile] phoenixsong 2008-05-20 12:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I totally get the retagging faces thing -- my sister and two of my cousins are all different ages, but all of them have similar builds/hair color. If you put pictures of them at the same ages next to each other, the only difference is that my sister is slightly less fair-skinned and has brown eyes instead of blue.

I likey s:)

[identity profile] phinnia.livejournal.com 2008-05-20 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! <3
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[identity profile] hobbitblue.livejournal.com 2008-05-20 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
OOh, the same character remembering oranges and new year in a previous bit? I like her.. please write more, lovely little vignettes that have so much happening behind them *loves*

[identity profile] phinnia.livejournal.com 2008-05-20 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
yes! this is her. <3 <3 thank you!