phinnia: sky and moon, with 'is it safe?' as the caption (is it safe?)
phinnia ([personal profile] phinnia) wrote2008-12-18 10:35 pm
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ever glade (a tale in 100 words)

The path dissolves.

Within is silence, sharp and beautiful.

The air is cold and still; it snaps like a breaking bone, a falling icicle, skin between two fingers. Everything is shades painted on shadows; dark jagged curves of stone, palest rings as a water-strider defines surface tension.

Voices cast their own ripples through the air.

--You have to do it ---

I can't ... what if

She knows about the -- she'll --

-- need the money, right?

Right. Right..

The fog parts, allows them entry.

Three weeks later:

Bones, picked clean, scoured white: the only markers on a disappearing path.

[identity profile] 2801rosie.livejournal.com 2008-12-19 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I agree with starsongs comment, creepy but in a good, 'I have to read this again' kind of creepy. Very Good.

[identity profile] phinnia.livejournal.com 2008-12-21 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
thank you. <3