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and after: a tale in 100 words
light scattershot through the blinds; shining prison-bar tattooed across lean muscles. the day continues blissfully unaware as she sleeps deeply enough for both of us.
i trace the long lines of her - the blossoming curve of hips waist shoulders, the soft cup of a breast. she turns and the darkened nipple is revealed. i dare to kiss it, my tongue flickering out.
"What time is it?" Her voice is thickened by sleep and a hand with bitten nails tangles its way through her hair. "Time to go?"
The lie falls easily from my mouth. "Not yet, love. Not yet."
i trace the long lines of her - the blossoming curve of hips waist shoulders, the soft cup of a breast. she turns and the darkened nipple is revealed. i dare to kiss it, my tongue flickering out.
"What time is it?" Her voice is thickened by sleep and a hand with bitten nails tangles its way through her hair. "Time to go?"
The lie falls easily from my mouth. "Not yet, love. Not yet."
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This is so sensual but there's also this beautifully subtle tension/nervousness there, so that we can interpret the situation/characters without it ever being stated.
In other words, you're AMAZING <3
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A question, though. Just one about your style. Do you purposefully not capitalize words or leave out punctuation? I'm just wondering if this is a stylistic choice and, if so, why you made it.
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i'm glad you love it. i'm pretty proud of this one too.
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